It takes exactly twenty four hours for the land beneath my feet to move.
Waw this is such an evocative piece!
The slow buildup of the closeness to midnight—from 4hr to an hour to a few second—for some reason felt really tense and nerve-racking haha.. I loved it!
I think it’s a tad bit extra but I’m glad this somehow reads like a thriller short story haha, but thank you so much for your kind words!
Ey what’s a good piece of poetry (which I think this is) if not dramatic!
Waw this is such an evocative piece!
The slow buildup of the closeness to midnight—from 4hr to an hour to a few second—for some reason felt really tense and nerve-racking haha.. I loved it!
I think it’s a tad bit extra but I’m glad this somehow reads like a thriller short story haha, but thank you so much for your kind words!
Ey what’s a good piece of poetry (which I think this is) if not dramatic!