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asha 🌞's avatar

girl stoppp this was the complete opposite of disappointing!! i really felt this piece and i adore the way you write

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Haha albeit I think I was being dramatic when I said that, thank you!!!

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jeri lee | جيري's avatar

you need to remove the part where it says disappointing, this was so pleasing for my mind to read! it was written in a similar manner to how i think hehehe

it was a whirlwind of love, adventure and yearning. damn i feel emotional now 🥲

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Get married then!! (I wanna attend a wedding)

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Hiba Fathima's avatar

😂

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ru ♡'s avatar

unreal ❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Thank you!

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reem's avatar

This was a beautiful read!!!

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Em's avatar

welcome back 💜

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Thank you em!!!

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thought daughter archives's avatar

this made me feel a whirlwind of emotions, thank you

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Always, thank you <3

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mariya ♡'s avatar

this was so beautiful to read omg 😍😍

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Thank you!! Glad you liked it

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momina's avatar

the image this painted in my head is quiet literally the essence of the way you write. magical.

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

AW thank you so so much!!

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momina's avatar

DISAPPOINTING?? im in awe of this. u did such a good job allahummabarik <3

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nour ♡'s avatar

disappointing?! i think this is genuinely one of the prettiest prose pieces I've read on here, had to reread it twice ♡ it is just that good.

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

I think it reads a bit choppy tbh but thank you that’s so heartwarming!! Glad you liked it

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Malik's avatar

somehow this sentiment will live on in me for a while

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

Carry it with pride, not a burden like I did. Something beautiful lies everywhere. Thank you </3

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Hiba Fathima's avatar

If this is what you call bad, I wonder how bad my writing is lol. I can never write this good. Barakallahu Feeki!

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Zoha | زوھا's avatar

It’s not BAD haha I just think it reads choppy but Jazakallah Hiba!!

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Hiba Fathima's avatar

Thats much better lol. Waiyyaki!

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